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Lie’s Web

on January 21, 2012

Here is a tanka I wrote today. Aparently it’s related to the haiku! Again, my source is from Shadow Poetry. 🙂

Lie’s Web:

Whether you were blind

Told one thing, learned another

It’s always your choice

To move forward and grow on

Or fall back, stuck in Lie’s web

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12 responses to “Lie’s Web

  1. granbee says:

    Your tanka here successfuly, succinctly reminds us of daily life choices to be on the side of truth–or not!

  2. willofheart says:

    love it, this is soo true…

  3. You just started my introduction to the theory of poetry with these beautiful words. Till now I simply write what comes to my mind.
    🙂

  4. christyb says:

    Ray, I had not heard of a tanka before. Thanks for introducing us to this form of poetry and giving such as nice example here!
    christyb

  5. imashwin says:

    Wow.. This is so beautifully written..

  6. LadyT says:

    simple but true words..

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