Novice Journal

A little this – a little that!


on May 1, 2012

Congrats! We’ve all made it into May!

Here is a poem I wrote for the amazing, Picture it & Write – hosted by Ermilia. Feel free to add your own contributions to this fun activity here on their blog. (Plus, you might want to go there to check out the pic that inspired this poem!)


The mighty baker
Rolls up His sleeves
The kitchen light illuminates
The dough that’s soon to bake

Flour spreads out
Upon a blue counter
The pound of thunder comes
He kneads until His work is done

The oven tray
Goes into fiery oven
And flour is left in many clusters
To our eyes, they’re clouds in Summer



12 responses to “Clouds

  1. granbee says:

    Imagining God as a baker creating the puffs of cloud from dough and using the sun as the oven is just so unique. I never would have thought of this. Wonderful meeting of this picture challenge, Ray! Hooray for you!

  2. corkedbottle says:

    “The pound of thunder comes” – My favorite line. Nice Poem : )

  3. Thanks for liking my “simplicity” post today. This is a nifty poem 🙂

  4. lily2u1 says:

    Playful and sweet! ~ Lily

  5. What a great take on clouds! Well done Ray

  6. Angela says:

    Lovely! This has an energy of great fun flowing through it – great to read 🙂

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